Did I go overboard?
I enjoy writing for PayU2Blog. They give me a target phrase and link. All I have to do is come up with a post using the phrase. I love the challenge of composing something unexpected, something that might cause the reader to click on the link in spite of themselves. Yesterday, when I wrote on “wedding rings”, I didn’t expect the post to take a life of its own. What started as a couple of sentence turned into something more. So my question to you is this: what do you think? I’m wondering if I got too carried away with this post. Could anyone enjoy this entry? What could I have done to make it a more readable post? Was the humor accessible? Should I even blog to begin with? 
I’m just looking for some constructive criticism. Yes, encouraging words are helpful too. But do you really want to encourage me into writing more? 
Popularity: 5% [?]
I enjoy writing for PayU2Blog. They give me a target phrase and link. All I have to do is come up with a post using the phrase. I love the challenge of composing something unexpected, something that might cause the reader to click on the link in spite of themselves. Yesterday, when I wrote on “wedding rings”, I didn’t expect the post to take a life of its own. What started as a couple of sentence turned into something more. So my question to you is this: what do you think? I’m wondering if I got too carried away with this post. Could anyone enjoy this entry? What could I have done to make it a more readable post? Was the humor accessible? Should I even blog to begin with? I’m just looking for some constructive criticism. Yes, encouraging words are helpful too. But do you really want to encourage me into writing more?
Popularity: 5% [?]
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It’s what makes your readers coming back for more! Don’t stop …. puleeeeeeesssssseeeee! LOL!
Your friendly editor,
I agree with your friendly editor … LOL! That as a great post! I love what you do with a sentence or two … or three … or four … oh what the heck!
Bravo!
I love reading your posts – you can even make the sponsored posts comical – how do you do that? Just keep on keepin’ on!
its cool to write posts like that and tell a little bit about your personal life. but IMO it was a little long. most readers get discouraged when they see over 2 or 3 big paragraphs and tend not to bother reading them, or at least all of the post. I think a more shortened, concise version would attract a few more people to read it, rather than skip over it.
I loved it.