Did I go overboard?
I enjoy writing for PayU2Blog. They give me a target phrase and link. All I have to do is come up with a post using the phrase. I love the challenge of composing something unexpected, something that might cause the reader to click on the link in spite of themselves. Yesterday, when I wrote on “wedding rings”, I didn’t expect the post to take a life of its own. What started as a couple of sentence turned into something more. So my question to you is this: what do you think? I’m wondering if I got too carried away with this post. Could anyone enjoy this entry? What could I have done to make it a more readable post? Was the humor accessible? Should I even blog to begin with? 
I’m just looking for some constructive criticism. Yes, encouraging words are helpful too. But do you really want to encourage me into writing more? 
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